Friday, March 26, 2010

Inhumanity

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Innumerous calamities strike hard
Natural and unnatural ones
Hundreds of lives perish
Under cruel human nature
Money counts more than
An innocent child surviving
Nefarious activites victimize women
Infants burned to death
Turning a blind eye
Yesterday ignored, laughed away


- written for Acrostic Only ; Prompt 9

13 comments:

  1. You expressed real harsh realities in life...

    Life is getting more difficult and even threatening!

    When can we have a better world?

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  2. Very nice take on the prompt. Well done, Vidya.

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  3. awww~i love it..the depiction was really astounding,..you write it really well :D



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  4. Inhumanity pisses me off! Good take on the prompt, and yes, I so agree with the last line!

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  5. Its sad we turn a blind eye to it n go on fooling ourselves that all izz well with the world...

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  6. @Ayu, Saras, Amias : Glad you liked it ..thankyou!

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  7. @Amity: Thats a difficult question to answer when we see how the world is today..but still we shouldnt give up.

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  8. @Rdl, Shas: Inhumanity is a disease which can be controlled but is unfortunately growing..
    Thankyou for your feedback..i hope you keep visiting..

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  9. Oh my God! This is such a wonderful piece and I say it because it hit me very hard. Inhumanity is a calamity that destroys lives on a daily basis, while Mother Nature is gracious enough to hold her wrath until it is unbearable. Perhaps Mother Nature's fury is also part of the of the inhuman treatment we give her. Again, nice acrostic.

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  10. You are so right, Vittal..Glad you liked the acro!

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  11. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/28/thursday-poets-rally-week-16-april-29-may-5-2010/

    it is time for week 16 Thursday Poets Rally,
    let me know if you wish to be a participant!
    thank you.
    you are represented a one of those fresh poet.

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  12. another tops,
    another beautiful poem!

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