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Celestial objects swiftly move
Ornamenting the dark night
Melting tail of theirs
Emits a magnificient glow
Treasure to the eye
Sihouettes in the sky
- written for Acrostic Only ; Prompt #9
Things are not what they seem (1214)
1 day ago
Nicely described! Good take on the prompt, Vidya.
ReplyDeleteOOOO i used to dream abt comets in my childhood!:) howdy!
ReplyDeleteThe description is very picturesque and apt!Nice take on the prompt, Vidya.
ReplyDelete@Saras: Thankyou for your words:)
ReplyDelete@Hary: ah! fascinating comets are, aren't they? :)
ReplyDelete@Ayu: I felt happy when I managed to write those two lines..Thankyou:)
ReplyDeleteThese beautiful words create a stunning image of the comet. Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Vidya. Your acrostic skills are evolving and it a wonder to witness.
ReplyDelete@The Write Girl: Thankyou so much
ReplyDelete@Amias: Was eagerly waiting for your feedback..I'm glad you liked it
Wow! This is really nice, though I am a little unsure about the first line. They sure move swiftly but since the point of view is that of a spectator they actually remain stationary for days! Just my 2 cents. It certainly describes Comets really well. Doing such a splendid job is lesser words and lines is really "tiresome", but your acrostics come out as natural ones. Cheers!
ReplyDelete@Vittal: Stars and the moon appear stationary to our eye, but comets dont appear still to us. They last only for a few moments, for us to see. Such is their speed:)
ReplyDeleteThankyou so much for your valuable feedbacks, Vittal. Cheers!