Wednesday, February 24, 2010

BROTHERHOOD





Picture courtesy : hpphoto


Bond made of love
Removes all our woes
Oodles of warmth pour
These caretakers of ours
Hold, never letting go
Eradicating evils of society
Remain with us forever
Having foresights of tomorrow
Oceanic display of togetherness
Of faith and hope
Devoted friends, standing tall

 
- written for Acrostic Only ; Prompt #3






17 comments:

  1. Liked the last line. They always stand tall in our lives.

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  2. Wow! I see this acrostic as a feature for brothers and the more broader brotherhood. Nice!

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  3. beautifully said vidya..

    you are very talented..

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  4. @Vittal - Glad you liked it:)

    @Shraddha - Thankyou so much Shradds

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  5. If this was true to all brothers, we would have a safer and more enjoyable world. A very optimistic take on the prompt vidya.

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  6. I agree Amias and continue hoping that things will turn for the better!

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  7. Congratulations, you've won Best Acrostic Poem for this prompt, as well as your contributions for Rainbows & New Dawn.

    You can collect your badges from the Acrostic Contest Winners page! :)

    Regards,
    Leo.

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  8. Congratulations on your win!!

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  9. @Leo: Thankyou:) and you are doing a great job in your new role too..keep it up!

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