Wednesday, February 24, 2010

BROTHERHOOD





Picture courtesy : hpphoto


Bond made of love
Removes all our woes
Oodles of warmth pour
These caretakers of ours
Hold, never letting go
Eradicating evils of society
Remain with us forever
Having foresights of tomorrow
Oceanic display of togetherness
Of faith and hope
Devoted friends, standing tall

 
- written for Acrostic Only ; Prompt #3






Posted by vidya at Wednesday, February 24, 2010
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16 comments:

  1. Sh@sFebruary 24, 2010 at 8:38 PM

    Liked the last line. They always stand tall in our lives.

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  2. vidyaFebruary 24, 2010 at 11:31 PM

    Thankyou Shas

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  3. itsyvitsyFebruary 25, 2010 at 5:07 AM

    Wow! I see this acrostic as a feature for brothers and the more broader brotherhood. Nice!

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  4. shraddhaFebruary 25, 2010 at 8:29 AM

    beautifully said vidya..

    you are very talented..

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  5. vidyaFebruary 25, 2010 at 9:11 AM

    @Ayu - Thanks dear

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  6. vidyaFebruary 25, 2010 at 9:12 AM

    @Vittal - Glad you liked it:)

    @Shraddha - Thankyou so much Shradds

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  7. SarasFebruary 26, 2010 at 9:17 AM

    Very well written Acrostic.

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  8. vidyaFebruary 26, 2010 at 2:47 PM

    Thankyou Saras

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  9. HaRy!!February 27, 2010 at 4:08 AM

    well done!!

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  10. vidyaFebruary 27, 2010 at 12:43 PM

    @HaRy: Thanks dude

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  11. Amias (ljm and liquidplastic)February 27, 2010 at 4:37 PM

    If this was true to all brothers, we would have a safer and more enjoyable world. A very optimistic take on the prompt vidya.

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  12. vidyaFebruary 28, 2010 at 12:40 AM

    I agree Amias and continue hoping that things will turn for the better!

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  13. Vinay Leo R.March 6, 2010 at 8:21 AM

    Congratulations, you've won Best Acrostic Poem for this prompt, as well as your contributions for Rainbows & New Dawn.

    You can collect your badges from the Acrostic Contest Winners page! :)

    Regards,
    Leo.

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  14. rdlMarch 6, 2010 at 10:59 AM

    Congratulations on your win!!

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  15. vidyaMarch 8, 2010 at 1:12 PM

    @Leo: Thankyou:) and you are doing a great job in your new role too..keep it up!

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  16. vidyaMarch 8, 2010 at 1:12 PM

    @rdl: Thankyou so much:)

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