Grand sized ice
Lessening and melting
Abrupts the ecosystem
Curtailing of water
Involved due to
Ever warm climate
Raises alarming questions
- written for Acrostic Only (prompt #12)
Things are not what they seem (1214)
2 days ago
You are so right about that. Also bombs being tested underground is causing all these earth quakes ... especially in areas that sat on the earth's fault. Write on!
ReplyDeletenice.. so nice!
ReplyDeletei liked it
I like this style u use, using the alphabets to tell a story!
ReplyDeletevery intelligent :)
@Amias: hmm..thats true.
ReplyDelete@Shriti: Thanks a lot
ReplyDelete@Chhaya: Writing in this form is called -'Acrostic'. Me got hooked to this kind of poetry lately:D
ReplyDeleteThankyou for the feedback:)
lovely piece of work!! small and rocking!
ReplyDeleteI like this art of acrostics. I got addicted Haikus like you seem to have been smitten by Acrostics. :-) But, there is a chance of going wrong in both styles, because if one tries to force words then it goes all haywire. But, not here. An important message in a brilliantly crafted Acrostic. I liked it very much.
ReplyDeleteGood one. Ur raising environmental concerns very creatively.
ReplyDeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteYou're so good at this :) ♥♥
@Hary - Thankyou so much :)
ReplyDelete@Vittal - That is so true..one misplaced word can change the whole meaning or theme. This is what drew me to Acrostics, where we literally play with words to match the title. In normal poems, its vice versa..
ReplyDeleteThankyou for your sweet words, Vittal
@Shas and Wink - Welcome to my blog..Thankyou for your kind words.
ReplyDelete@Ayu - Im really bad at tags *sigh*
ReplyDeleteYour nicely written acrostic has raised a pertinent point. Thanks for your comment.Am unable to respond in the absence of email ID
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lovely acrostic vidya!!i very much enjoyed it!!
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@KParthasarathi - Thankyou:)
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@Shraddha - Thankyou dear..Nice to hear frm you after a long time. Yes, joining Amias' acrostics have made me write a lot and I have made more friends:)
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