Friday, April 30, 2010

Burnt Out

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Bursts of anger
Under work pressure
Running out steam
Naively continuing
To slog

Outward healthy
Unhealthy inside
Times of distress


- written for Acrostic Only ;  Prompt 3

9 comments:

  1. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/02/poetry-awards-for-week-16-thursday-poets-rally/

    2 poetry awards,
    2 friendship award...
    Happy Sunday!
    Happy May!

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  2. Well done! Indeed! I can relate to all the lines you have written. It is so common these days, what with the extra pressure and stretching. It is a bad trend and must be rectified.

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  3. @Hary: yup..im going to join the rat-race soon
    :(

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  4. @Ji: Thankyou for the comment and the lovely awards:)

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  5. @Vittal: It surely ia a bad trend.. sigh! Removes the concept of enjoying the work.

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  6. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/05/thursday-poets-rally-week-17-may-6-12-2010-homecoming/

    I try to honor previous participants,
    welcome back for a visit to me,
    or attend our Rally once more.

    you are given three award from the post from me.

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  7. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/20/poetry-blog-community-award-from-adam/

    another poetry award 4 u.
    have a beautiful day!
    I appreciate your uplifting comments and handsome spirits.
    cheers!

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