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Amateurish pranks
Insignificant rants
Rolling eyes
Hovering cries
Enlightened never
Airy cravings
Drool all over
- written for Acrostic Only ; Prompt 6
Meaning of Airhead: Someone who isn't very smart; a stupid person.
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Nice attempt. But I feel this one hasn't come out as good as your potential make it. I am sorry I am being blunt here. I hope you don't mind. I think airhead more of means like a sane person who is dumb, or is subjected to childish behavior. Somewhere here I get the feel that the acrostic is describing a mentally disabled person.
ReplyDeleteThankyou Vittal, for pointing this out. I went overboard here with this poem and should have made it more subtle, like you said. You are right about the meaning. Guess the acro brought out the 'airhead' in me..lol.
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ReplyDeleteGood Attempt slightly veering away towards the end.Do see my "Air Head" for a change!Lol
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